Mary Robison uses a third-person narrator, an objective observer, to convey
tone and theme in her short story "Yours." The narrator's stance perfectly
parallels the seemingly detached attitude of the main characters, Allison
and Clark. Although Allison is sick, the narrator only mentions her
immanent death at the end of the tale, only hinting slightly at her
condition by stating that the thirty-five year old woman wore a wig.
However, that mere fact would not necessarily suggest illness; the narrator
also focuses strongly on the eerie setting of an October night in Virginia
as the backdrop for the story. Suggesting death, the Halloween atmosphere
corresponds to the narrative. In fact, the wig implies disguise, a
fundamental aspect of the Halloween holiday. Furthermore, Allison and Clark
avoid addressing death directly, just as the narrator does: the bulk of the
story consists of descriptions of the couple carving pumpkins on their
porch at night. What isn't discussed becomes as powerful as what is,
similar to the way in which what is carved out of the pumpkin becomes as
important as what is left behind. Because the narrator's attitude and
observations closely mimic those of Allison and Clark, the third-person
objective point of view enables the reader to understand the impact of
The narrative would have a different impact had the narrator been one
of the main characters. Very little insight is offered into how Allison
actually feels; however, the narrator offers a lot of subtle cues that help
the reader formulate a clearer picture of her personality and her life. For
example, the reader gathers from her clothing that she is a practical
woman: "she wore durable clothes, usually, for she volunteered afternoons
at a children's day-care center," (275). Moreover, her volunteer work
suggests a selfless personality; although she is near death she
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